Critique Feedback

General comments:
  • Find a nugget to explore
  • Experimentations are needed in order to push your project in a direction, there's room to go wrong at the moment; eg. Colour charts, abstraction - work from raw data
  • Get something through practice
  • Lead to outcome instead of having something pre-determined
  • Distribution of data
  • What are the misunderstandings?
  • Interviews are useful - primary sources
  • The use of language needs to make sense to your target audience
  • How can you represent different words?
Comments regarding my presentation:
  • Think about the USER - want to avoid getting caught up in ethical situations
  • Perhaps aim your target audience to non-sufferers as a pre-warning?
  • Record different events that may cause a turbulence in people's lives, choose one to associate these feelings to?
  • Be clear in what you want to do
  • Pick one event to develop a target audience instead of pin-pointing a particular age group
  • Be careful for ethical issues that may rise
I feel my feedback was really helpful as I did struggle to find a focus where I could completely avoid an ethical issue. I now need to expand on these points and define exactly what my target audience is and how I will achieve this.

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